Monday, August 06, 2007

evening


pre-darkness
lines of communication
intrude


photo by lori bierly
words by mandy smith

A contribution to the evening theme at One Deep Breath

12 comments:

Clare said...

Really nice -- "lines of communication/ intrude" -- short and sweet and packs a whole lot of the reality of technology in. Gorgeous photo, too.
:)

Yoga Gal said...

Cool photo, kind of sends chills. Makes me muse, who lives there and what are their secrets.

Greggo said...

wonderful idea for a haiku about evening, and the intrusion of technology on beauty. there have been so many pictures i've taken with phone lines in the way! lol. great photo and words.

Fledgling Poet said...

What a gorgeous picture...loved your haiku!

Rae Trigg said...

Nicely done. I like the juxtaposition of intruding technology on natural beauty.

tumblewords said...

I love the linear motion of words against the dark and the exposure of human works against nature's sky.

Emily Lin said...

Beautiful description about evening - pre-darkeness. Oh and I love how your continue it - lines of communication, intrude. Very nice.

Faye Pekas said...

Love the farm in the sunset and love your poem. Thanks :)

Steve G said...

The picture impresses me. The words make it stronger.

travelphilippines said...

very nice sunset.

Anonymous said...

Nice pic & message.

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