Tuesday, January 08, 2008

Two Moons

Two moons in response to the moonstruck prompt at One Deep Breath.



deep forest something in a clearing howls

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island sky on Selene's face pockmarks


Many thanks to isabella kinga and phill deason for allowing me to use their photographs.
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11 comments:

susan said...

These read as separate pieces but their promixity leaves me a bit perplexed. I'm not sure how to interpret them.

2:15 pm
SandyCarlson said...

I quite like the first line. I feel like I'm in that forest!

2:46 pm
Plain Foolish said...

That second one - yes. I love how in open sky, the full moon is so clear you can see the craters.

4:19 pm
Tumblewords: said...

I like these thoughts. Had forgotten Selene referenced the moon. Nice reminder...

5:47 pm
get zapped said...

The moon in all its glory!

11:04 pm
qualcosa di bello said...

i can just *hear* the howl in reading your words...

2:58 pm
paisley said...

my goodness... i guess the moon and i have never been on a first name basis... both very lovely.....

4:34 pm
Roswila said...

Nice one liners. Especially that first. I always enjoy one that references a sense other than sight.

7:43 pm
the laughing gypsy said...

Wonderful poem--and photos!
Thanks for link, I'm linking back now :-)

2:45 pm
Anonymous said...

Both moons, such perfection!

3:41 am
spacedlaw said...

I quite like the slightly out of synch feel of this.

4:36 pm

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