Monday, May 07, 2007

sleep



lunch-time doze
extends into afternoon
grass stains


photo by lori bierly
words by mandy smith

A contribution to the sleep theme at One Deep Breath

19 comments:

Gudl said...

Nice!

Lori said...

Mandy, I love your words here. Very well done!

Sandy said...

Looks like the park where we eat lunch sometimes! Nothing is better than a snooze in the sun.

Colorful Prose said...

So very witty! I have good memories of lunches like this.

Tammy said...

What a delightful haiku for spring Mandy.

blondie said...

Aaahhh.... memories!

:)) blondie

Crafty Green Poet said...

very pleasant image, now where's the nearest grassy field?

jem said...

Nice one. Lots to think about, the grass staining us, us staining the grass, motion, lack of motion. I like it a lot!

Jone said...

Lovely idea. I would be sneezing thought. Am envious.

strauss said...

That is fabulous. I erally enjoyed this one. I think it is my favourite thus far - very very spring. I can smell teh fresh cut grass :)

Unfolding Rose said...

lovely lunchtime laziness...and the grass stains that give it away! I think the whole scene is captured so well in your haiku.

Angie said...

I like this one - I read "stains" as a verb! But it's cool either way.

kintheatl said...

I think we should all subscribe to lunchtime snoozes! Very Nice!

Remiman said...

Mandy
You've captured one of life's most enjoyable moments!
rel

Pearl said...

:) Nice image and word and moment.

Valjean said...

Mh, so nice!

Thanks for your visit. I wonder how you got to my PB.

Hugs!

angela said...

Printing your Haiku on the photo really is very effective.
Love the combination of words and photo.
Angela

Sassy Sundry said...

Sigh...

Yes it does.

littlepurplecow said...

Love this one.