Monday, May 07, 2007

sleep



lunch-time doze
extends into afternoon
grass stains

photo by lori bierly
words by mandy smith

A contribution to the sleep theme at One Deep Breath
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18 comments:

Lori said...

Mandy, I love your words here. Very well done!

3:28 pm
Anonymous said...

Looks like the park where we eat lunch sometimes! Nothing is better than a snooze in the sun.

9:26 pm
Unknown said...

So very witty! I have good memories of lunches like this.

11:10 pm
Tammy Brierly said...

What a delightful haiku for spring Mandy.

1:42 am
Blondie said...

Aaahhh.... memories!

:)) blondie

10:06 am
Crafty Green Poet said...

very pleasant image, now where's the nearest grassy field?

11:04 am
jem said...

Nice one. Lots to think about, the grass staining us, us staining the grass, motion, lack of motion. I like it a lot!

11:52 am
Jone said...

Lovely idea. I would be sneezing thought. Am envious.

1:38 pm
strauss said...

That is fabulous. I erally enjoyed this one. I think it is my favourite thus far - very very spring. I can smell teh fresh cut grass :)

5:23 pm
Anonymous said...

lovely lunchtime laziness...and the grass stains that give it away! I think the whole scene is captured so well in your haiku.

11:00 pm
angie said...

I like this one - I read "stains" as a verb! But it's cool either way.

12:32 am
kintheatl said...

I think we should all subscribe to lunchtime snoozes! Very Nice!

1:22 am
rel said...

Mandy
You've captured one of life's most enjoyable moments!
rel

2:35 am
Anonymous said...

:) Nice image and word and moment.

2:09 pm
IF said...

Mh, so nice!

Thanks for your visit. I wonder how you got to my PB.

Hugs!

9:29 am
angela said...

Printing your Haiku on the photo really is very effective.
Love the combination of words and photo.
Angela

10:26 am
Sassy Sundry said...

Sigh...

Yes it does.

10:21 pm
littlepurplecow said...

Love this one.

4:54 am

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