Monday, August 20, 2007

daybreak


eyelids plop
just as the alarm goes off
i press "snooze"


photo by lori bierly
words by mandy smith

A contribution to the daybreak theme at One Deep Breath

11 comments:

Yoga Gal said...

Ars gratia artis!

Clare said...

Cool photo. And I can totally relate to your terrific haiku!

Faye Pekas said...

Ohhh so true. I push snooze more than once most mornings. But my alarm is relentless.. every 7 minutes.. over and over.

Marcia (MeeAugraphie) said...

We have been known to repeat your haiku until the alarm forgets to wake itself. Fun to read.

tumblewords said...

An observation of fun and frustration. Good read!

megan said...

very fun one!

Rae Trigg said...

Very nice! I sympathize with hitting the snooze button.

Patois said...

An apt description, indeed, of that moment right before the alarm. I sympathesize with your need to snooze.

spacedlaw said...

I can imagine a little frog going also through this pattern...

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I've had many nights like that! :)

Roswila said...

Oh, my, me too! You've really caught the moment.