Monday, August 20, 2007

daybreak


eyelids plop
just as the alarm goes off
i press "snooze"


photo by lori bierly
words by mandy smith

A contribution to the daybreak theme at One Deep Breath

11 comments:

Yoga Gal said...

Ars gratia artis!

Clare said...

Cool photo. And I can totally relate to your terrific haiku!

Anonymous said...

Ohhh so true. I push snooze more than once most mornings. But my alarm is relentless.. every 7 minutes.. over and over.

Anonymous said...

We have been known to repeat your haiku until the alarm forgets to wake itself. Fun to read.

Tumblewords: said...

An observation of fun and frustration. Good read!

megan said...

very fun one!

Rae Trigg said...

Very nice! I sympathize with hitting the snooze button.

Patois42 said...

An apt description, indeed, of that moment right before the alarm. I sympathesize with your need to snooze.

spacedlaw said...

I can imagine a little frog going also through this pattern...

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I've had many nights like that! :)

Roswila said...

Oh, my, me too! You've really caught the moment.