Monday, October 29, 2007

change


bereft
only a change in the tide
will bring relief

words: mandy smith
photo: phill deason


in response to the change prompt at One Deep Breath.

16 comments:

Jo said...

Great fun......and the photo is beautiful!

Sandy said...

You told the whole story with ten words and a photo.
I love it!

Roswila said...

Oh my, this is how I've been feeling since my California trip. Utterly bereft. Can't wait for the new tide to come in. :-) Really nice haiga. I particularly like the photo.

tumblewords said...

Wonderful layers in those three short lines and the picture makes another. Impressive!

Barone said...

Breath meets sigh as I read this piece; special collection of words. barone

qualcosa di bello said...

a perfect rendering of welcome change for sure...as usual your photo paring is so lovely.

Clare said...

Oh, sweet!!! I LOVE this -- wonderful haiku and photo. I really like the sense of hope and patience in this.
:)

Faye Pekas said...

Yep waiting for the tide. I love it.

christine said...

Very creative pairing. The set says it all perfectly.

Cloudscome said...

Perfectly balanced words and image!

Greggo said...

very clever connection of words and image! great!

laura from coconutannies said...

Change is surely a welcome thing when one is BEREFT! Very nicely done!

WorkingWords100 said...

frustration! I really felt it.

Rae Trigg said...

Your haiku describes the photo so well. I could feel the impatience and dismay.

Patois said...

Excellent photo and words. Truly says it all.

bluechic said...

i really like this poem and the photo is absolutely beautiful too