Sunday, October 21, 2007

closeness


evening ripples so close to catching the big one

words: mandy smith
photo: phill deason


in response to the closeness prompt at One Deep Breath.

17 comments:

Greggo said...

nice take on the 'closeness' prompt! the photo is great, and you tied your haiku to it so well!

WebOJ said...

You have a way with words. Thank you for visiting my blog. It brought me to your blog. It won't be my last visit.

tumblewords said...

A delightful photo and words that portray a perfect closeness! Wonderful!

Rae Trigg said...

I really like the way the photo and the haiku mesh and the feeling conveyed of anticipation. Nice take on the prompt.

Ron said...

Another good example of the haiga concept. Well done.

spacedlaw said...

A good take on the prompt!

Plain Foolish said...

This reminds me of sitting on the dock with my dad, fishing with cheese cubes. Thank you.

Christine said...

I am attracted to the ambient quality of this piece. It is very peaceful and beautiful.

qualcosa di bello said...

very serene...& yet expectant!

get zapped said...

Very clever!

Fledgling Poet said...

I can hear the sounds in this beautiful picture, and from the visuals your words conjure up...beautiful. :~)

Roswila said...

Very nice haiga! I can imagine if the boat goes on and on, no one would mind....

Yoga Gal said...

Lovely!

Jo said...

Very Zen!

Poly said...

Very nice.

Endment said...

Perfection

megan said...

this beautiful photo and your words brought that end-of-the-day winding down feeling...very nice.