Sunday, December 02, 2007

containers


with my love
sweet fruit daily shared
how long will it be
till the boxes are empty
and our mouths dry?


photo by lori bierly
words by mandy smith

© 2007

A response to the containers theme at One Deep Breath

9 comments:

spacedlaw said...

I like the ambiguity created by the apples in the picture and your text.
Very touching poetry.

Deslilas said...

Daily life poetry for the one who knows.

Sandy Carlson said...

Beautiful. An anxiety I have felt in the past!

God bless.

Mine's up at

http://slcpoems.blogspot.com

Greggo said...

nice picture, and word-image to accompany it!

susan said...

L3 to close conjure up a nice image and meaning. enjoyed. thanks for the read.

tumblewords said...

Fascinating photo and provocative words! Very nice!

get zapped said...

Wow, I love this! I picked apples one season and it's a lot of hard work, but well worth it. Enjoy your apples ;)

LittleWing said...

are those fujis?....excellent.. the eternal question...nothin worse than a wormy apple...

qualcosa di bello said...

your words (poignant & true) are conveyed so well by that photo