with my love
sweet fruit daily shared
how long will it be
till the boxes are empty
and our mouths dry?
photo by lori bierly
words by mandy smith
© 2007
A response to the containers theme at One Deep Breath
York Town Bus
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I like the ambiguity created by the apples in the picture and your text.
Very touching poetry.
Daily life poetry for the one who knows.
Beautiful. An anxiety I have felt in the past!
God bless.
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http://slcpoems.blogspot.com
nice picture, and word-image to accompany it!
L3 to close conjure up a nice image and meaning. enjoyed. thanks for the read.
Fascinating photo and provocative words! Very nice!
Wow, I love this! I picked apples one season and it's a lot of hard work, but well worth it. Enjoy your apples ;)
are those fujis?....excellent.. the eternal question...nothin worse than a wormy apple...
your words (poignant & true) are conveyed so well by that photo
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